Add on as I tip, trip stalk the night. Darkness you are my love. I seek you out.
Caress my cheek. Blow my hair.
Come to me, witness bare.
By a stream I will wait.
Please don’t be late. I await.
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Add on as I tip, trip stalk the night. Darkness you are my love. I seek you out.
Caress my cheek. Blow my hair.
Come to me, witness bare.
By a stream I will wait.
Please don’t be late. I await.
August 26, 2010 at 3:30 am
beautiful!
August 26, 2010 at 3:30 am
Hello, How are you?
You are invited to attend Thursday Poets Rally
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/25/thursday-poets-rally-week-27-august-26-sept-1-2010/
Thanks for the attention!
Happy Thursday!
😉
love your talent!
August 26, 2010 at 2:23 pm
u make me smile,
we tolerate everyone new,
your job is to scan the participants list, comment for a minimum 18 poets…
that is on behalf of you, because they are supposed to return favors…
Have fun!
Happy Thursday!
🙂
August 26, 2010 at 3:58 pm
Aww, thank you. I’ve already commented on 11 poets so far. So many great writers. Just happy to have a chance to share my work with others.
August 26, 2010 at 2:53 pm
Very beautiful…I love the night…the darkness. I especially liked “witness bare”…it says a lot in just to words.
August 26, 2010 at 4:02 pm
what a lovely poem!
Of Fun and Friendship
August 26, 2010 at 5:22 pm
beautiful one, TNL 🙂 like this..
thanks for visiting mine.. 🙂
August 26, 2010 at 7:05 pm
very nice
August 26, 2010 at 9:54 pm
What a nice poem!!!
August 27, 2010 at 12:29 am
I love it! the atmosphere is tangible…Thank you for visiting my poem as well. Its fun to connect!
August 27, 2010 at 4:02 am
love the flow….very nice. Heartspell
August 27, 2010 at 4:04 am
Loved it so much …thanks for sharing xx
August 27, 2010 at 6:43 am
Beautiful words. I hope it was worth the wait. Have a wonderful weekend.
August 27, 2010 at 3:37 pm
have a fun Friday!
August 27, 2010 at 3:58 pm
Thank you, you too, have a great day!
August 27, 2010 at 5:52 pm
I reach out to you My Darling.. How could someone not reading such beautiful words??
Your words made me close my eyes and feel someone waiting by the tree next to the banks.. Oooh.. So beautiful..
August 28, 2010 at 12:49 am
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/27/friendship-means-a-world-2-me/
pick three awards from my post,
pass them to 1 to 10 blogging friends with whom you believe that they deserve them.
have fun!
Take good care.
August 28, 2010 at 4:01 am
your words are pure. there is an innocent quality in the way you portray this love. very nice
August 28, 2010 at 9:52 am
thoughtful, as enreal has said already, your words are very pure. well done x
August 29, 2010 at 1:21 pm
Oh wow. this is excellent
August 29, 2010 at 6:56 pm
Sheer brilliance! I swear!!
August 30, 2010 at 1:40 am
Lovely and yearning. Well done.
August 30, 2010 at 3:38 am
Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.
August 31, 2010 at 7:02 pm
This is lovely and simple, yet evokes a strong sense of in-the moment. Beautiful!