Playful part, toying with my art.
Make shape through me–
grace be to record the message..
of the line…of the time.
Innocence raw, pure set before with glimmering shine.
Language only I understand–land in my palm, my lap.
Alert the mind, prepare the soul–outpour, downpour…come to me.
Make me but a means to an end.
Tend to creativity, vision, glow.
I am but a Shepard always in tow. These two eyes wide as bowls at the spark it beholds.
Playful part always toying with my art.
For Jingle’s Thursday Poets Rally Week 29
September 22, 2010 at 6:42 pm
playful part, toy with my art…
musical opening.
love the word flow.
September 23, 2010 at 12:58 am
Thanks! I was hoping it would read a bit musically.
September 22, 2010 at 6:55 pm
thanks for the participation,
your blog is cool,
so do your poetry…
September 22, 2010 at 6:55 pm
thanks for the participation,
your blog is cool,
so do your poetry…
😉
September 23, 2010 at 12:44 am
Wonderful poem penned for the Rally, sending you love my friend x
September 23, 2010 at 12:58 am
Thanks sweetie!
September 23, 2010 at 1:31 am
Love the way the poem flows off the page. Almost lyrical. Great poem!
crb.
September 23, 2010 at 1:37 am
Thanks so much!
September 23, 2010 at 5:41 am
this can be put to tune I think 🙂 well said..! 😀
Rally Week 29, My Poem
September 23, 2010 at 1:24 pm
Aww, yay! What I was hoping for with this poem, a musical quality. Thanks so much for your feedback!
September 23, 2010 at 7:22 am
Nice rhythm! A good entry.
September 23, 2010 at 1:24 pm
Thank you, I appreciate it!
September 23, 2010 at 9:45 am
wonderful thoughts penned down even more beautifully.. great one..
Happy Rally
http://oliviasmindlymatters.wordpress.com/2010/04/24/678/
September 23, 2010 at 1:26 pm
Thank you so much for your sweet words!
September 23, 2010 at 9:56 am
these two wide eyes as bowls….nice….it does have good flow…
September 23, 2010 at 1:26 pm
You are too kind. Thank you for reading!
September 23, 2010 at 3:03 pm
Lovely rhyme.. So sweet… Wonderful written..
Happy Rally…
Rhyming Waters
–Someone Is Special–
September 24, 2010 at 12:12 am
Bless you. Thanks for your kind words.
September 23, 2010 at 5:09 pm
Playful part, toying with art… nice start and I liked it till the end… thanks for sharing…
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
At Twitter @VerseEveryDay – Sharing few lines about love, longing and life
September 24, 2010 at 12:19 am
Thank you for your kindness.
September 23, 2010 at 9:31 pm
“grace be to record the message..”:)
September 24, 2010 at 12:24 am
Yes, grace be. 🙂
September 23, 2010 at 11:16 pm
It expresses to me that you are an instrument to which your art “play” comes through. Your heart gives back in charity as your soul shows its gratitude. Lovely and loving…
September 24, 2010 at 12:26 am
Thank you for your feedback. That is exactly the message I was trying to convey. 🙂
September 24, 2010 at 1:10 am
I’m so glad I “got” it!
September 23, 2010 at 11:34 pm
Lovely! My art is toying with me lately lol! Have had no inspiration.
September 24, 2010 at 12:28 am
Aww, I know you can write a poem about having no inspiration! lol. 🙂
September 24, 2010 at 12:43 am
I enjoyed the experience of reading this poem and the gorgeous photo you’ve posted reminds me of the fjords in Norway.
Your blog is so elegant and lovely.
September 24, 2010 at 12:47 am
Thank you, I appreciate your feedback. Also, thank you for the kindness in regards to the picture in the heading of my blog. That was taken in Arizona last year visiting my brother. 🙂
September 24, 2010 at 4:45 pm
I love the sweetness of the surrender in this poem… well done. 🙂 heartspell
September 24, 2010 at 11:56 pm
Thank you, so nice of you to say!
September 24, 2010 at 4:57 pm
“outpour, downpour… come to me.” what a magical line. 🙂
September 24, 2010 at 11:58 pm
Thank you, I think your writing is magical too!
September 24, 2010 at 10:01 pm
toyed or not , i loved your art !! keep it up 🙂
September 24, 2010 at 11:59 pm
Bless you! Thanks!
September 24, 2010 at 11:01 pm
Good rhythm and rhyme–such beautiful craft. Keep up the good work!
September 24, 2010 at 11:59 pm
Thank you kindly!
September 25, 2010 at 4:40 am
profound and lovely… great piece you have here!
September 25, 2010 at 3:40 pm
Thank you so much you are too sweet..:)
September 26, 2010 at 12:44 am
Fantastic, this is a great entry
September 26, 2010 at 3:00 pm
Thanks, you are a sweetie!
September 26, 2010 at 5:07 pm
I dig your style…you are a master weaver of the written word as evidenced by the sparkling bits of magic that shimmer through each poetic thread!!
Awesome Rally Post!
September 26, 2010 at 9:55 pm
Wow. Thank you. Your kindness means the world. Thank you so, so much!
September 28, 2010 at 10:54 pm
Simply checking,
please make sure return favors to poets who are here.
Happy Tuesday!
I valued your participation.