Spin though time and space…
twirl, swirl…take it’s fee on..
..the heart, mind, body.
~~~
Reach to catch the spinning stars..
Through bars of physical walls…
break through shell.
~~~
But one night, to see..
and a lifetime to break free..
swirling our dreams, rapid as they seem.
~~~
Twirling under night’s glow,
flowing through broke free door..
Bore though..twirling, swirling. Free.
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Submitted as part of One Stop Poetry’s One Shoot Sunday Picture Prompt Challenge
Submitted as part of Jingle’s Poetry Potluck
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February 6, 2011 at 5:51 pm
Like how you captured the sense of circular movement throughout your repetition. Thanks for taking the challenge today!
February 6, 2011 at 6:08 pm
Thank you, your compliments mean a lot to me!
February 6, 2011 at 6:48 pm
Nicely written. Especially liked “But one night to see and lifetime to break free” 🙂
February 7, 2011 at 2:42 pm
Thank you, I am glad you liked it!
February 6, 2011 at 9:30 pm
i wonder what breaking free actually gets us…it might be fun just to try…
February 7, 2011 at 2:43 pm
Very true. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
February 7, 2011 at 10:14 am
I really like the detached feeling of freedom in your wordplay here. We all want to get there!
February 7, 2011 at 2:44 pm
Thanks! I appreciate your feedback and I agree with your thoughts on freedom.
February 8, 2011 at 3:09 am
powerful writing…
Welcome Join Jingle Poetry Potluck week 21,
Feel free to share 1 to 3 old poems or random poems, cheers.
Love your talent demonstrated here,
Hope to see you share.
xxx
February 8, 2011 at 2:16 pm
Thanks Jingle, I am sorry I forgot to link in. I just linked this poem to your Potluck! Thanks again for the compliments on my writing!
February 8, 2011 at 6:09 pm
great,
very well penned piece.
support by visiting a dozen entries near your own, have fun!
A++
February 8, 2011 at 4:00 pm
beautiful. Wonderfully said.
http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/02/07/free-soul-7th-feb-2011/