Hello from under the sky
Wave hi
Drive on by
Sun points in the direction
Moon lights
Stars point the way.
Under the sky
Curling, spinning…not quite free to be.
Petals thrown in the wind
Scatter at play
Rue the day when…
under the sky,
I tried to think why.
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May 16, 2011 at 1:41 am
Wow. This is such an amazing write. Nearly brought me to tears.
May 16, 2011 at 11:14 pm
Aww. Thank you, I don’t know what to say, but just…thank you!
May 16, 2011 at 2:28 am
Love the rhythm you have created here – thank you for sharing
May 16, 2011 at 11:14 pm
Thank you for reading!
May 16, 2011 at 8:25 am
Very nice imagination and nicely written :)My potluck entry
http://sandhyaguptamp.blogspot.com/2011/05/can-you-save.html
May 16, 2011 at 11:15 pm
Thank you for such lovely compliments!
May 16, 2011 at 10:30 pm
This poem certainly left me in a pensive state of mind, Nicole… very beautifully put… and the pace of the poem was simply excellent!!
May 16, 2011 at 11:16 pm
Thank you for such kind words of praise my friend! I appreciate it!
May 17, 2011 at 7:41 am
I like this…petals on the wind…lovely pace and style.
May 18, 2011 at 7:56 pm
Thank you so much, appreciate it!
May 17, 2011 at 7:23 pm
cute, playfully perfect….
🙂
May 18, 2011 at 7:56 pm
You are very kind, thank you!
May 23, 2011 at 1:40 pm
beautiful as always.
Greetings:
How have you been?
I have been sick last week, sorry for missing some of your potluck entries.
Hope to see you join our poetry potluck week 36 today!
Week 36 Theme is sketches, images, and impressions,
But you are NOT required to submit theme fitting pieces, old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are all welcome…
Looking forward to seeing you in and reading all of You.
xoxox